This
wasn't happening. This couldn't
be happening. They were humans. Boys. There was absolutely no way
this was happening.
“Dude!
What are we going to do?” Steve looked over at Billy. He couldn't
tell his brother was 13. Or that he himself was 15. He still couldn't
believe this was happening.
“Steve!
What are we going to do?!” Billy was growing frantic. Steve
couldn't blame him. If there was a time for frantic panicking, it was
now.
“I
don't know, Billy.”
“What
do you mean you don't know? This is your fault!” This was true,
Steve thought. It really was his fault.
Billy
puffed, “I should have never let you take me to that Voodoo
priestess.”
“Look
on the bright side, Billy. At least we're at McDonald's.”
I love the twist at the end! Nothing like a teenage boy's point of view, is there? :D
ReplyDeleteMy story - http://newpillowbook.wordpress.com/2012/05/25/friday-fictioneers-losers/
Soo funny! Loved it.
ReplyDeletehttp://castelsarrasin.wordpress.com/2012/05/24/checkin-out-the-joint-friday-fictioneers-may-2012/
Lol, the twist at the end is funny! It really is a great little twist. Cheers to Steve for finding the silver lining! :) --
ReplyDeleteHere's a link to my post for the week, hope you check it out: http://moniqueshante.wordpress.com/2012/05/26/friday-fictioneers-the-light-5-25-12/
Funny ending. It puts a lighter spin on the unfortunate transmogrification.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine: http://logo-ligi.com/2012/05/25/mothballs/
Oh, boy. I think they'll be late getting home for dinner.
ReplyDeletehttp://thebradleychronicles.wordpress.com/2012/05/24/flash-fiction-friday-almost/
Ha! Cute. I'll bet you could dream up a whole book to go with this little story.
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